[诗词雅韵]小试《情愿》英译 [复制链接]

                                                                                
                                                                                       情愿    
                                                                                                       林徽因                                                                         我情愿化成一片落叶，                                                                         让风吹雨打到处飘零；                                                                          或流云一朵，在澄蓝天，                                                                         和大地再没有些牵连。                                                                          但抱紧那伤心的标志，                                                                         去触遇没着落的怅惘；
                                                                         在黄昏，夜半，蹑着脚走，                                                                         全是空虚，再莫有温柔；                     忘掉曾有这世界；有你；                    哀悼谁又曾有过爱恋；                   落花似的落尽，忘了去                   这些个泪点里的情绪。                     到那天一切都不存留，                   比一闪光，一息风更少                   痕迹，你也要忘掉了我                   曾经在这世界里活过。

                      Willingness   I would rather to turn into a piece of fallenleaf, driven by wind and beaten by rain till nowhere to lingeron; Or a flowing cloud floating in the clear blue sky,bearing no entanglement with the earth anymore.
However, hold tightly the logo marked withsadness,to tap unfathomablepathos without fixed whereabouts;At dusk, at midnight, Iam walking on tiptoe,All left in mind isvoid, no trace of gentleness remain;                                                                              Let slip you from my mind as well as the world as awhole;                                                                             lament those who once had fallen intolove;
                                                                             Doomed to fall leafless as the blossom drop, banish                                                                             these sentiments overwhelmed by tear drops from mymind                                                                               Tillthat day no more does everything retain,                                                                             Much less a flash of light, a blast of breeze;                                                                            Trace, still you also need to obliterate me from yourmind,                                                                            once in your world  being inhabited by me.

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排版能不能排好一些呢？

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